题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。一支英国中学生足球队应邀来你校进行一场友谊比赛。请给你校外教Peter写封邮件,邀请他观看比赛。内容包括:
1. 比赛时间、地点;
2. 赛后活动。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m honored to tell you that a football team from a UK middle school will come to our school. We’re expecting you to enjoy their wonderful performance with us.
The team, consisting of 15 members in total, is scheduled to arrive at 3 o’clock next Monday afternoon. A brief welcome ceremony will be held, followed by a match between this visiting team and our school football team on the playground. The match will begin at 3:30 pm. After the match, both teams will gather at the Lecture Hall, where these British friends are ready to talk about their school life and answer questions from us students.
Looking forward to your presence.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,邀请外教观看友谊比赛并告知相关事宜。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:三段式结构。第一段表明目的;第二段阐述具体情况;第三段寒暄结束。并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.写信背景;写信目的(a football team from a UK middle school;expect you to enjoy their wonderful performance with us)
2.相关情况介绍
1)到达时间。(be scheduled to; 3 o’clock)
2)行程安排。(welcome ceremony ; a match; talk about their school life and answer questions from us students)
3.期待到来
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be honored to; consist of; be scheduled to; welcome ceremony; followed by; be ready to do; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m honored to tell you that a football team from a UK middle school will come to our school.
2. The team, consisting of 15 members in total, is scheduled to arrive at 3 o’clock next Monday afternoon.
3. A brief welcome ceremony will be held, followed by a match between this visiting team and our school football team on the playground.
4. These British friends are ready to talk about their school life and answer questions from us students
5. Looking forward to your presence.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改