题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是李华,寒假就要来临了,你的美国朋友Tom来信询问你的寒假计划。请你给他回信告知你的安排并邀请他来中国做客。内容要点如下:
1、你的寒假安排(完成寒假作业、锻炼身体、做家务)。
2、欢度春节(享受美食、欣赏烟花、领压岁钱)。
3、发出邀请。
要求:3段式作文、120词左右、书写规范整洁。
参考词汇:fireworks (烟花) lucky money( 压岁钱)
【答案】
Dear Tom,
Glad to have received your letter, in which you ask me about my plan for the coming winter vocation. Now let me tell you in details.
As you know, we Chinese students have a lot of homework during our winter vocation, which is meant to help us review our lessons and get more knowledge. Therefore, I will firstly try my best to finish my homework . Besides, physical exercise and doing some housework are also what I should do, because they can help build up my body and share some burden of my parents. What’s more, the Spring Festival is right in our winter vocation, at which time we can have delicious food, enjoy fireworks and get some lucky money from our parents and relatives.
Generally speaking, although we may have some hard time studying and doing housework, we can also enjoy ourselves a lot. Why not come to visit me? I believe we can share a lot of happy time then. Looking forward to your coming to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于提纲作文,考生首先要看清楚要求,然后再根据要求详细讨论。本文的话题是给网友写一封回信,告知你的安排并邀请他来中国做客。,属于书信类作文,所以使用一般将来时和一般现在时的时态。在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】 范文中运用一些常见的短语in detail详细地;try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事;build up my body强健体魄;share some burden of my parents分担家长的重担;what’s ,more而且;generally speaking大体上;have hard time doing sth.做某事困难;look forward to盼望着。还有定语从句As you know ;which is meant to help us review our lessons and get more knowledge;以及由介词+which引导的定语从句in which you ask me about my plan for the coming winter vocation;at which time we can have delicious food, enjoy fireworks and get some lucky money from our parents and relatives和表语从句what I should do体现出作者的写作水平,为文章增色不少。