题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校外籍教师Miss Rose常常在课余时间辅导你英语口语,使你在上周学校举行的英语演讲比赛中荣获第一名。为此,你决定写一封感谢信,对Miss Rose的帮助表示真诚的感谢。
注意:1)文章包括上述内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2)词数100左右;
3)信的开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Rose,
I am writing to you
……
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Miss Rose,
I am writing to you to tell you a piece of good news. Last week our school held a Spoken English Competition. I stood out in the competition and won the first place. In my view, all the achievement that I have gained is owed to your help. During your spare time, you often spent so much time in helping me with my spoken English that I made rapid progress. During the competition, I followed your advice on how to behave and how to keep a good state, which led to my success. I'm grateful for your help. Without your help, I couldn't have won such a prize. I decide that I will make more efforts and try to make grater progress.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:试题为应用文中的书信写作,试题只给出写作框架,并未给出所有的具体写作细节,为半开放性写作。写好此文,需注意三点:一是写信格式要准确,信的开头已经给出,但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当,本文应重点写的是对Miss Rose的帮助表示真诚的感谢。三要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
Without your help等的运用为文章增色添彩。