题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,高考(College Entrance Examination)后想去美国旅行20天,主要想更多地了解当地文化和习俗。给你的美国朋友Jason写信,请他根据你的时间和旅行目的对你附件中的行程(itinerary)进行一些修改。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.信的格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jason,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jason,
My high school is over at last! I am planning to travel around America for 20 days after the College Entrance Examination, hoping to learn more about the local culture and custom.
Since I have never been there before and only got some information from the Internet, I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. Considering my travelling time and purposes, I wonder if you can make some changes to my itinerary in the attachment so that my trip can turn out more colorful and practical. After all, you know what suites me best.
I am looking forward to your reply and seeing you soon in America.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容是给你的美国朋友Jason写信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意书信格式。
【亮点说明】本文层次分明,结构紧凑,语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构,如让步状语从句Since I have never been there before and only got some information from the Internet, I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.宾语从句 I wonder if you can make some changes to my itinerary in the attachment so that my trip can turn out more colorful and practical.等。