[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I as well as my family are going to New York City this weekend. I had been looking forward to go there for a long time. It is one of the modernist city in the world. There have also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can't learn it in school. I'd also like to see the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building. Fortunately, the twin towers destroyed on September 11th, 2001 or I would have the chance to see them by myself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I bet it will be a unforgettable experience.

【答案】【1】are 改成 am

【2】had改成have

【3】go改成going

【4】city改成cities

【5】have改成are

【6】去掉it

【7】towers∧destroyed中间加were

【8】此处表示转折“否则”，“遗憾的是，这对塔被毁掉了，否则我就会有机会独自去看它们的”，故把and改成or。

【9】excited改成exciting

【10】unforgettable 是元音开头，所以把a改成an。

【解析】1. as well as连接主语时，后面的谓语动词和as well as前面的主语保持一致，故把are改为am。

2. 句意：我好长时间一直期盼着去那里。根据句意可知，用现在完成时态的进行时态，故把had改为have。

3. 固定搭配：look forward to sth./doing sth.“期盼某事或做某事”，to是介词，后面用名词或动名词作宾语，故把go改为going。

4. one of+名词复数，故把city改为cities。

5. 此处是there be句型，根据句子主语a lot of museums可知，把have改为are。

6. something作先行词，在后面的定语从句中作宾语，所以关系代词that省略了，it是多余的，故把it去掉。

7. 句意：不幸地是双子塔在2011年9月11日被毁掉了。根据句意可知，用一般过去时态的被动语态。故在destroyed后面加were。

8. 句意：不幸地是双子塔在2011年9月11日被毁掉了，否则我会有机会亲眼看见它们。故把and改为or。

9. 句意：现在我正在为令人兴奋的旅行做准备。故把 excited改为exciting。

10. unforgettable以元音音素开头，所以表示“一次难忘的旅行时”要用an，故把a改为an。

练习册系列答案

One of the biggest 【5】 (challenge) teachers have in the classroom is the non-stop battle of 【6】 (keep) students working because students were more absorbed in social media than learning. Many students felt they needed to be online and check messages even they had important work to do in class.

【7】 is very common for students to be 【8】 (physical) present in class, but mentally absent because they are using their mobiles. A study found that test scores increased 【9】 six percent after mobile phones 【10】 (ban) in class.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

For students learned instruments summer is always a “music season”. During vacation time, we are always busy attending various of lessons, taking exams and participating in competitions. This summer I joined in a music competition but was lucky to get the second place. It was the first time that I have played on the stage. In front of the stage was my excited schoolmates. Facing such many people, I felt very upset at first, but the encourage from my teacher kept me going ahead. Fortunate, I was given a silver medal, that increased my confidence. In short, nothing is impossible to willing heart.

【题目】B

You probably know who Marie Curie was, but you may not have heard of Rachel Carson. Of the outstanding ladies listed below, who do you think was the most important woman of the past 100 years?

Jane Addams(1860—1935)

Anyone who has ever been helped by a social worker has Jane Addams to thank. Addans helped the poor and worked for peace. She encouraged a sense of community(社区)by creating shelters and promoting education and services for people in need. In 1931, Addams became the first American woman to win the Nobel Peace Prize.

Rachel Carson(1907—1964)

If it weren’t for Rachel Carson, the environmental movement might not exist today. Her popular 1962 book Silent Spring raised awareness of the dangers of pollution and the harmful effects of chemicals on humans and on the world’s lakes and oceans.

Sandra Day O’Connor(1930—present)

When Sandra Day O’Connor finished third in her class at Stanford Law School, in 1952, she could not find work at a law firm because she was a woman. She became an Arizona state senator(参议员) and, in 1981, the first woman to join the U.S. Supreme Court. O’Connor gave the deciding vote in many important cases during her 24 years on the top court.

Rosa Parks(1913—2005)

On December 1, 1955, in Montgomery, Alabama, Rasa Parks would not give up her seat on a bus to a passenger. Her simple act landed Parks in prison. But it also set off the Montgmery bus boycott. It lasted for more than a year, and kicked off the civil-rights movement. ＂The only tired I was, was tired of giving in,＂ said Parks.

【1】 What is Jane Addams noted for in history?

A. Her social work. B. Her lack of proper training in law.

C. Her efforts to win a prize. D. Her community background.

【2】 What is the reason for O’Connor’s being rejected by the law firm?

A. Her lack of proper training in law. B. Her little work experience in court.

C. The discrimination against women. D. The poor financial conditions.

【3】 Who made a great contribution to the civil-rights movement in the US?

A. Jane Addams. B. Rachel Carson. C. Sandra Day O’Connor. D. Rosa Parks.

【4】What can we infer about the women mentioned in the text?

A. They are highly educated. B. They are truly creative.

C. They are pioneers. D. They are peace-lovers.

【题目】—Yesterday, I read White Night by Higashino Keigo. Such a good book!

—________. No one can match Higashino Keigo in artistic talent.

A. You said itB. You don’t say

C. You can’t be seriousD. You set me up

【题目】One of my first memories as a child in the 1950s was a discussion I had with my brother in our tiny bedroom in the family house in Bethlehem, Pennsylvania.

We had heard in school about a planet called Pluto. It was the farthest, coldest, and darkest thing a child could imagine. We guessed how long it would take to die if we stood on the surface of such a frozen place wearing only the clothes we had on. We tried to figure out how much colder Pluto was than Antarctica, or than the coldest day we had ever experienced in Pennsylvania.

Pluto, which famously was downgraded from a “major planet” to a “dwarf planet”(矮星) in 2006, captured our imagination because it was a mystery that could complete our picture of what it was like at the most remote corners of our solar system

Pluto’s underdog discovery story is part of what makes it so attractive. Clyde Tombaugh was a Kansas farm boy who built telescopes out of spare auto parts, old farm equipment and self-ground lenses. As an assistant at Lowell Observatory in Flagstaff, Arizona, Tombaugh’s task was to search millions of stars for a moving point of light, a planet that the observatory’s founder thought existed beyond the orbit of Neptune. On February 18, 1930, Tombaugh found it. Pluto was the first planet discovered by an American, and represented a moment of light in the midst of the Great Depression’s dark encroachment(入侵).

Pluto is much more than something that is not a planet. It’s a reminder that there are many worlds out there beyond our own and that the sky isn’t the limit at all. We don’t know what kinds of fantastic variations on a theme nature is capable of making until we get there to look.

【1】Why did Pluto become famous in 2006 according to the passage?

A. Because it lost its major planet status

B. Because it disappeared in the sky

C. Because it was discovered by an American

D. Because it was proved to be the coldest planet in the universe

【2】What can be a suitable title for the text?

A. An American Scientist: Clyde Tombaugh

B. Pluto was First Discovered by a Boy

C. Pluto’s Strange Romance

D. The Days I Spent with My Brother in Pennsylvania

【3】What can we learn from the fourth paragraph?

A. Clyde Tombaugh discovered the darkness in the Great Depression

B. Pluto was the only planet that was discovered by Clyde Tombaugh

C. Clyde Tombaugh’s job was to build telescopes for Lowell Observatory

D. Clyde Tombaugh’s telescopes used for searching stars were very simple

【题目】When I was six, Dad brought home a dog 【1】(call) "Brownie". Brownie got along well with every member in our family. She would go to 【2】was sick and just be with them. We always felt much 【3】(good) when she was around.

One day, as I was getting her food, she 【4】(bite) a hole out of one of Dad's shoes. I scolded her, 【5】(tell) her what she did was wrong. She looked down at the ground and then went and hid. I saw tears in her eyes.

Brownie went everywhere with us. People would stop and ask if they could pet her. Of course she'd let anyone pet her. She was just the most lovable dog. There were many times【6】we'd be out walking and a small child would come over and pull on her hair. She never barked or tried to get away. The【7】(fun) thing was that she would smile. This frightened people because【8】thought she was showing her teeth. Far from the truth, she loved everyone.

Now many years have passed since Brownie【9】(die) of old age. I still miss the days when she was【10】us.

【题目】假定你是李华，高考(College Entrance Examination)后想去美国旅行20天，主要想更多地了解当地文化和习俗。给你的美国朋友Jason写信，请他根据你的时间和旅行目的对你附件中的行程(itinerary)进行一些修改。

注意：1.词数100左右：

2．信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jason,

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【题目】此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多于的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Jim,

I am pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you some changes in my school.

You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is no longer that it used to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new building have been built and are in use. One of them is a new classroom building, in it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. Therefore, my school is well equipped about sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What’s more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

I believe my school become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.

Yours,

Li Hua

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