题目内容
11.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I almost didn't wake up in time for school this morning.I stayed up late last night,prepare my lessons.The alarm clock does go off,but I didn't hear them because I was too tired.
It was already 7o'clock when I opened my eye.The first thing I was aware was that I would be late.Terrified,I ran to school and without having breakfast.I didn't want to be criticized by the teacher,nor I want to be laughed at by my classmates.Lucky,I rushed into the classroom in the last minute.We had a test today,for that I was well-prepared and it was so easy a exam that I got high marks.What an exciting experience!
分析 作者昨天晚上复习到很晚,所以今天早晨没能按时醒来,由于不想被老师批评和被同学们笑话,作者没吃早饭就跑着去学校了,幸运的是终于在上课前的最后一分钟赶到了学校,然后进行了一场测验,由于准备的很好,作者在测验中得了高分.
解答 I almost didn't wake up in time for school this morning.I stayed up late last night,prepare my lessons.The alarm clock does go off,but I didn't hear them because I was too tired.It was already 7o'clock when I opened my eye.The first thing I was aware∧was that I would be late.Terrified,I ran to school and without having breakfast.I didn't want to be criticized by the teacher,nor∧I want to be laughed at by my classmates.Lucky,I rushed into the classroom in the last minute.We had a test today,for that I was well-prepared and it was so easy a exam that I got high marks.What an exciting experience!
详解:
1.prepare改为preparing;考查分词作状语,主语I与动词prepare是主动关系,应用现在分词作伴随状语,故用preparing.
2.does改为did;考查动词的时态,全文时态应呼应.故此题does应改为did.
3.them改为it;考查代词,此处指代上文的the alarm,故用单数it.
4.eye改为eyes;考查名词,eye是可数名词,结合句意此处应该用复数形式eyes.
5.aware后面加加of;考查固定短语.be aware of sth.知道,意识到.故应加of,The first thing在句中做介词of的宾语.
6.去掉and;考查连词,本句不含并列成分,without介词短语在句中做状语.
7.nor后面加did;考查助动词,否定词放句首,应用部分倒装,故在I前面加did构成倒装句.
8.Lucky改为Luckily;考查副词,此处用副词作状语副词修饰整个句子.
9.that改为which;考查关系代词,介词后关系代词表示物时,应用which,故把that改为which.
10.a改为an;考查关系,exam是以元音音素开头的单词,前面应用an表示泛指.
点评 1.整体了解短文,抓住中心大意.2.注意实词,虚词的用法以及时态和人称的变化.3 重视语境,结合上下文运用语言基础知识找出错误所在,加以改正.