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Dear Jason,
I¡¯m Li Hua. I¡¯m writing to ask you to do me a favor. It¡¯s about an English speech contest with the title An Unforgettable Experience in High School, which I¡¯m going to take part in this Saturday. I¡¯ve finished my draft, but I find it still far from satisfactory.
I¡¯m not sure of the usage of some words. There may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. Would you be so kind to spare some time to check them out and improve my article? If it¡¯s convenient to you, please send it back by Thursday afternoon.
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