Question

【题目】高中三年，你或多或少，或快或慢，在学习或生活方面，都在进步。请你以My Progress为题，用英语写一篇作文，给学校的英语报社投稿。

要求：1.简要描述你的进步及原因。

2.毕业前你下一步的打算。

3.字数100个词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Not great as it is, I’d like to share with you my progress in these three years.

To be honest, I was not so good at my study when I came to high school, often feeling tired out and at a loss. Sometimes, I was even on the point of giving up. However, my change happened when my teachers as well as my classmates came to encourage me one day in Senior Two. It was their encouragement and my own thinking that resulted in my slow but steady progress.

Still not a top student as I am now, I have found myself filled with confidence and power to face any difficulty and challenge. There is no denying that I am bound to fight for my dream to the end in the following months!

【解析】

试题分析：注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，注意格式。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。

【亮点分析】

文章第一句是as引导的让步状语从句，将形容词提前要用倒装结构：形容词 + as + 主语 + 系动词。Not great as it is, I’d like to share with you my progress in these three years. 尽管不是很了不起，我愿意与你分享这三年来我的进步。 第二段第一句是一个when引导的时间状语从句To be honest, I was not so good at my study when I came to high school, often feeling tired out and at a loss. 老实说，当我刚刚升入高中的时候我的学习并不是很好，经常会感到精疲力尽和失落。第三句也是一个when引导的时间状语从句However, my change happened when my teachers as well as my classmates came to encourage me one day in Senior Two. 然而，当我上二年级的时候，我的老师和同学们都来鼓励我，这使我开始改变了。第二段最后一句是一个强调句It was their encouragement and my own thinking that resulted in my slow but steady progress.正是他们对我的鼓励以及我自己的想法导致了我缓慢、却稳定的进步。第三段第一句依然是一个让步状语从句，副词still提前要用倒装：Still not a top student as I am now, I have found myself filled with confidence and power to face any difficulty and challenge. 虽然我现在还不是班上的尖子生，但是我充满了自信和力量去面对任何困难和挑战。最后一句是一个同位语从句There is no denying that I am bound to fight for my dream to the end in the following months!不可否认，我一定要在接下来的几个月内为我的梦想奋斗到底。文章中运用了多个从句，同时还使用了一些很好的短语和结构。如第二段中的to be honest老实说；on the point of doing正在做某事； as well as 也；result in导致。