Question

【题目】

赞成	反对
1.广告能引导人们选择货物； 2.广告能使消费者更好地了解货物和商家； 3…….	1.经常被虚假广告欺骗； 2.在阅读广告上浪费了大量的时间； 3…….
你的观点：1……. 2……

注意：1.短文的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.词数100左右。

Nowadays, more and more advertisements appear on newspapers, broadcasting, magazines as well as streets. Advertisement is a popular way to communicate with consumers. People have different views on advertisements.

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But whether you like it or not, advertisements have become a part of our life.

Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, more and more advertisements appear on newspapers, broadcasting, magazines as well as streets. Advertisement is a popular way to communicate with consumers. People have different views on advertisements.

Some people think advertisement guides choices of goods. Meanwhile, advertisements also offer us some new information about the product. And they help consumers to know the goods and the businessmen better. In addition, consumers can gain not only knowledge of goods but also artistic enjoyment. Contrary to those people, many other people think advertisements are very unpleasant. Consumers are often cheated by the false advertisement on which consumers always waste a great deal of time. What’s more, consumers feel annoyed to be interrupted when they are watching TV play.

So I suggest that there should not be too many TV advertisements. The advertisements which will be issued must be approved by the Industrial and Commercial Bureau.

But whether you like it or not, advertisements have become a part of our life.

【解析】这是一篇正反观点类作文，题目列出了一些要点，要求考生在叙述完题中观点后，说出自己的观点。在写这篇作文时，应注意以下几点：

1．议论文文章主体时态应用一般现在时。2. 要点要齐全，中正反方观点各包含两个原因，应完整叙述。但是不能用简单句来罗列要点，要用适当的连接词使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然。另外，可以采用长短句结合等方法，使用多种句型，使文章句式多变。3. 行文思路要有逻辑性，比如可以让两方观点对比，或者先说重点，再全面解释。另外，可以适当选用较高级的词汇使表达更地道，文章内容更充实。

【范文亮点】

1.使用“Meanwhile，In addition，Contrary to，What’s more”等连接词，很好地组织了文章结构，使文章叙述有条理、不散乱。2. 使用了被动句式和定语从句，句式高级：Consumers are often cheated by the false advertisement on which consumers always waste a great deal of time. 3. 灵活运用了一些较高级的句式、固定搭配和动词，例如“guides choices of goods，know … better，artistic enjoyment，be approved by” 使文章句子表达清晰，给人留下深刻印象。