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18.假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter想来中国上海参观世博园.请你根据以下信息给他发一封电子邮件,介绍世博园基本情
【写作内容】
1.地理位置:黄浦江两岸,南浦大桥和卢浦大桥之间.
2.面积:5.28平方公里,其中浦东部分为3.93平方公里,浦西部分为1.35平方公里.
3.园区分布:按照不同的地区、不同主题和功能,分为A、B、C、D、E共5个片区,每个片区平均60公顷(hectare).
4.开放时间:2010年5月1日至10月31日,每天从9:00到24:00对外开放15小时.
5.门票:可通过网上或世博园入口处购买.
【写作要求】
1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2.短文的开头已经给出;
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯.
Dear Peter,
Glad to know that you will come to Shanghai for a visit to the Expo Site.Here I'd like to show you a brief introduction to it.
        .
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本文为看图作文.根据对图片的理解及英语提示写一篇短文.根据提示要求进行写作,基本时态为一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.
亮点部分  It covers a total area of 5.28 square kilometers,with 3.93 sq km in Pudong and 1.35 sq km in Puxi.(高分句型一) 带有with的复合结构
According to different regions,different themes and different functions,the site is divided into five zones,marked A,B,C,D and E respectively,each of which has an average area of 60 hectares.(高分句型二)带有介词的非限制性定语从句

解答 Dear Peter,
     Glad to know that you will come to Shanghai for a visit to the Expo Site.Here I'd like to show you a brief introduction to it.
     The Expo Site is located on both sides of the Huangpu River and between the Nanpu Bridge and Lupu Bridge.It covers a total area of 5.28 square kilometers,with 3.93 sq km in Pudong and 1.35 sq km in Puxi.(高分句型一)According to different regions,different themes and different functions,the site is divided into five zones,marked A,B,C,D and E respectively,each of which has an average area of 60 hectares.(高分句型二)For the convenience of the visitors at home and abroad,the Expo site opens for 15 hours from 9:00 till 24:00 each day during the Expo session from May 1 to October 31.By the way,you can purchase/buy the ticket on Internet or at the entrances to the Expo Site.
     Looking forward to meeting you soon.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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