题目内容
6.今年4月16号,北京的部分高校开展了校园开放日活动,你和你的父母前往一所你向往的大学参观咨询.请根据下面四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文日记,叙述你们这一天的活动及感受.注意:1.日记的开头已为你写好.
2.词数不少于600
April 16Saturday,
Sunny
Today some universities were open to the public. .
分析 本文要求记叙"我"和父母参加"校园开放日"的经过,叙述的是过去的事,因此用过去时.要点:1.学校开放日的意义,因为计划上英语系,特意咨询了一些信息与建议;2.参观了形式多样的校园文化俱乐部;3.备受鼓舞,决心考上理想大学.
审好题之后,就构思如何写的问题.行文时要注意不漏要点,同时在要点齐全的前提下,进行内容拓展;另外要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,增加文章得分点,还要注意合理使用一些连词和衔接词,使文章看起来更有条理,更连贯.
So,I,accompanied by my parents,went to Peking University.(高分句型一) accompanied by my parents 属于过去分词作状语
Directly we went to the stands where teachers and voluntary students of different departments made introduction and answered questions.(高分句型二)句中带有where引导的定语从句
Inspired by what I saw during the day,I am determined to try my best to get admitted to the university.(高分句型三)Inspired by what I saw during the day在句中作状语
解答 April 12,Saturday Sunny
Today some universities were open to the public.It's a good chance for me to know more about my dream university.So,I,accompanied by my parents,went to Peking University.(高分句型一) Early in the morning,we arrived there excitedly.To our surprise,many students had already been there.Directly we went to the stands where teachers and voluntary students of different departments made introduction and answered questions.(高分句型二) Since I intend to choose English as my major,we spent lots of time asking the teachers for detailed information and advice.I was deeply impressed by the wonderful courses and learned professors.
Then we were attracted by the stands of various clubs.It was really amazing that they have organized such colorful activities I just can't wait for such a wonderful college life!
Inspired by what I saw during the day,I am determined to try my best to get admitted to the university.(高分句型三)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.