题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Jack 在邮件中告知你他想来中国当英语外教,请你回复邮件给他一些应聘的建议。内容包括:
查找网上相关信息;
了解中国文化;
展示教学能力。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack ,
How are you doing ?
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Best wishes !
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack ,
How are you doing ? Glad to hear that you express a keen interest in teaching English in China . As your friend , I would be happy to give you some suggestions .
First , please search on the Internet to get as much relative employment information as possible to find a proper position . Next , you’re supposed to immerse yourself into the ocean of Chinese culture for it can be of great help for you to communicate better with your students . Last but not least , don’t forget to show your excellent teaching ability . With good teaching methods , not only will you hold your students’ attention , but the students will appreciate your vivid lessons .
Do hope you find them useful .
Best wishes !
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Jack 在邮件中告知你他想来中国当英语外教,请你回复邮件给他一些应聘的建议。要注意邮件的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点:了解中国文化;展示教学能力。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如:on the Internet在网上communicate with sb.与某人交流。还使用了宾语从句Glad to hear that you express a keen interest in teaching English in China .和定语从句As far as I am concerned, this game is a very good chance for us. For one thing, doing sports will not only do good to our health, but also helps us to refresh ourselves and keep a clearer mind, which will make us learn more efficiently.和not only…but (also)…句型With good teaching methods , not only will you hold your students’ attention , but the students will appreciate your vivid lessons .等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。