题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖,希望有人能够帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件:
1. 表达给她提供帮助;
2. 说明你能胜任辅导;
3. 列举你的提高计划。
注意:
1. 字数80词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Sharon,
This is Li Hua. Learning from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin, I am willing to offer my help.
First, being outgoing and humorous, I guarantee you’ll never get bored with me around. Besides, my good command of both Mandarin and English will boost our communication and connections. As for how to improve it, I think it will help if we video chat online every day and meet in person every weekend. Meanwhile, some fun and clearly- pronounced Chinese movies are good resources we can turn to, which will surely help you understand Chinese and its culture.
Good luck with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封电子邮件。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文;
人称:第一、三人称为主;
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时;
要点:
1.表达给她提供帮助;2.说明你能胜任辅导;3.列举你的提高计划。.
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
learn from;outgoing and humorous;get bored;command of;as for;turn to等
第三步:连词成句
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First;Then
2.表并列补充关系:Besides;and;also
3.表因果关系:as等
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改