题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Jim要来中国学习中文,请你帮忙找个寄宿家庭(host family)。请你回一封邮件,告诉他你已经找到合适的家庭了,内容包括:
1. 所处的位置;
2、家庭成员情况;
3、费用。
注意: 1.词数100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to learn that you will come to study Chinese in China. You asked me to look for a Chinese host family for you in your last e-mail. I have now found one that should meet all your requirements.
The host family, whose flat is only two hundred meters away from the school where you will be studying, is made up of three people. The host and the hostess, both kind, enthusiastic, and hospitable, are English teachers of a middle school. Their only son, a college student aged 19, is about your age. He is willing to communicate with you and go out travelling with you. As for the rent, it is also very reasonable, just 800 yuan a month. You won’t find a better option than this.
Are you satisfied with this option? I’m looking forward to your arrival!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是提纲类作文写作,要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文采用惯用的三段式,句子结构严谨,层次分明,句中使用高级句子。I’m glad to learn that you will come to study Chinese in China.运用宾语从句;I have now found one that should meet all your requirements.定语从句在句中体现;The host family, whose flat is only two hundred meters away from the school where you will be studying, is made up of three people.本句中whose引导的非限制性定语从句和where引导的限制性定语从句完美结合;You won’t find a better option than this.此句是比较级表示最高级的意思,堪称经典;Their only son, a college student aged 19同位语的运用恰到好处;另外,will be studying, is made up of,both kind, enthusiastic, and ,As for the rent, Are you satisfied with,looking forward to的使用为文章增色添彩。