Question

【题目】请阅读下面文字.并按要求写一篇150词左右的文章。

When you are paying upwards of 15,000 a year to have your child privately educated, the big sum of money for extra tuition(学费) may not sit well with you. But that is exactly what seems to be happening. An increasing number of parents look to "top-up" their child's already expensive education with a private tutor.

According to managing director Nevil Chiles of Kensington&Chelsea Tutors, the agency's students tend to fall into two groups. There are those who are struggling with a particular subject and benefit from one-to-one tuition. The second group consists of students who are already excellent but whose parents want to ensure they go on to their preferred school or university.

"We felt Mica needed help with exam technique and we also realized that she did much better one-to-one than in a classroom," explains Bowman, who contacted Kensington & Chelsea Tutors on the advice of a friend who used them for her sons, including one who was attending Eton."Mica has established a good relationship with her tutors and has gained confidence as a result of the tutoring." adds Bowman.

写作内容：

1.用约30个单词概括短文主要内容。

2.简要分析社会上私人辅导受欢迎的原因(至少两条)。

3.谈谈你对私人辅导的态度(支持或反对)，并说明原因(至少两条)。

写作要求:

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句，

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称，

3.标题已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：私人辅导private tutoring 家庭教师tutor

评分标准：

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当

注意:请将书面表达撰写在答题卡上。

Private Tutoring

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Answer 1

【答案】

Private Tutoring

Nowadays，more and more students, either struggling or excelling, are turning to private tutors，despite the high tuition. They are satisfied with the outcome.

The reasons are not hard to find. Parents expect too much of tutors, believing they can give their children more encouragement and motivation. Indeed, private tutors, can make teaching plans tailored to the need of them, in whose class students can receive due attention and get enlightened.

I believe private tutoring benefits students a lot. Private tutors, mostly experienced and enthusiastic about teaching, can provide students in sight into their puzzling problems. Besides，time wasted on computer games can be made full use of to develop their potential to the fullest. Some of them, lost in despair for repeated failure, can build up confidence with tutors’ specific guidance, which goes a long way to their academic success.

In a word, private tutors’ role can never be underestimated.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是话题作文，写作内容是谈谈对私人辅导的态度。学生可根据自己的实际情况来写。首先要概括文章大意，其他叙述自己的看法，最后总结。可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】Parents expect too much of tutors，believing they can give their children more encouragement and motivation.现在分词作伴随状语；Indeed，private tutors, can make teaching plans tailored to the need of them, in whose class students can receive due attention and get enlightened.非限制性定语从句；I believe private tutoring benefits students a lot.句中使用宾语从句；Some of them , lost in despair for repeated failure，can build up confidence with tutors’ specific guidance , which goes a long way to their academic success.过去分词短语作定语和非限制性定语从句完美结合。