题目内容
【题目】某海外学校举办英语夏令营,开设了如下课程:园艺 (gardening),烹饪 (cooking),自救 (self-rescue),护理 (nursing)。假如你是王华,写一封申请信,报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括:
1. 你感兴趣的课程;
2. 你期望从这门课程中学到什么;
3. 为什么想学这些内容。
要求:1. 不要逐字逐句翻译,可适当增加情节;2. 词数100左右,不含已给出的。
Dear Sir,
I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses, such as gardening, cooking, self-rescue, nursing and so on. ___________________________________________________
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Yours truly,
Wang Hua
【答案】Dear Sir,
I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses, such as gardening, cooking, self-rescue, nursing and so on. After my consideration, I want to attend a course about self-rescue, in which I want to learn how to survive when an accident happens or a natural disaster strikes.
I think thebigearthquakethat happenedinWenchuan,Sichuanprovince is still a big shock to all of us. During the earthquake, thousands of people were trapped inside the ruins because the rescue team was unable to get them out. What a terrible thing! Of course, we can’t prevent the accidents or disasters, but we can be prepared. That is why I want to take this course. For one thing, I hope to gain some self-rescue skills so that I can stay calm when something bad happens. What’s more, I will be able to offer help to others if necessary.
I am looking forward to your course beginning soon.
Yours truly,
Wang Hua
【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先审题,某海外学校举办英语夏令营,开设了如下课程:园艺 (gardening),烹饪 (cooking),自救 (self-rescue),护理 (nursing)。假如你是王华,写一封申请信,报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括:1. 你感兴趣的课程;2. 你期望从这门课程中学到什么;3. 为什么想学这些内容。其次要确定时态,用一般现在时。在写作过程中,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合题目所给出的信息,不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如After my consideration, I want to attend a course about self-rescue, in which I want to learn how to survive when an accident happens or a natural disaster strikes. 这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。I think the big earthquake that happened in Wenchuan, Sichuan province is still a big shock to all of us.这里含有一个定语从句和宾语从句。That is why I want to take this course. 这里含有一个表语从句。