Question

【题目】请你写一篇文章，介绍我校为学生创立的校刊 “Xinghai Stones”，并谈谈自己的感想。内容包括：

1.开设目的：缓解压力，确保健康。

2.校刊优势：专业的心理指导 。

3.校刊内容：专业的建议，学生的心声, 你的感想。

注意：1.字数100 左右。

2.开头已给，不计入总数。

Our school has set up a school magazine called “Xinghai Stones” for us students.

Answer 1

【答案】

The school magazine , aimed at relieving pressure and ensuring the health of us students, has a unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us some professional guidance. Besides, it covers the thoughts and feelings of students and provides professional suggestions.

From my point of view, not only does our school attach importance to our study but also it put our mental health at the top of the list. In addition, it also provides a platform for us to communicate with our teachers and parents. Moreover, we can get help and guidance from professionals to solve our mental problems. With its help, we can achieve our goals with more confidence and in a more effective way.

【解析】

试题分析：请你写一篇文章，介绍我校为学生创立的校刊 “Xinghai Stones”，并谈谈自己的感想。内容包括：1.开设目的：缓解压力，确保健康。 2.校刊优势：专业的心理指导 。3.校刊内容：专业的建议，学生的心声, 你的感想。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.字数100 左右。2.开头已给，不计入总数。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。The school magazine , aimed at relieving pressure and ensuring the health of us students, has a unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us some professional guidance.此句包含有过去分词作状语，还有同位语从句。not only does our school attach importance to our study but also it put our mental health at the top of the list。Not only……but also句型的使用。连接词的使用也很到位：Besides，In addition, Moreover。