题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启事,并根据写作要点写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms. Chen at www. chenlaoshi@163.com.
要点:1. 陈述应征目的;
2. 说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
注意: 1. 字数100词左右;
2. 可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade 3. ___________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ms. Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:
本文事要求写一封应征邮件。陈述应征的目的和条件。文章给出了招募启事和提纲,成文时应注意以下几点:(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态:以一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:which引导的非限制性定语从句的句子…which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates..;条件状语从句I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration..2.使用了重要短语:apply for申请;as well as 和,以及;get along well with和…相处融洽;have such a good command of熟练掌握;live up to达到。