Question

【题目】某英语报正在就中学生可不可以带手机上学这一话题开展讨论。假如你是李华，请你根据下表所提供的信息，向该报编辑写一封英文信，发表观点。

手机的优点	1．便于与父母和朋友联系； 2．能增加乐趣。
带手机上学 存在的问题	1．上课时使用手机干扰教学；2．用手机聊天、上网时费钱。
建议	1．上课时不许使用手机； 2．贵重物品，个人宜妥善保管。

注意：1．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2．词数：不少于100字。

Dear Editor :

I’m a senior three student . I’m writing to tell you my opinion

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m a senior two student . I’m writing to tell you my opinion on whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones. I think they can do that. Because students can stay in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.

However, there are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.

In conclusion,I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive,the owner should take good care of it.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类作文，是一篇正反观点类文章。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语stay in touch with与。。保持联系；have fun娱乐；spend too much time and money on花费时间和钱在。。上；In conclusion总而言之；I’m writing to tell you my opinion whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones.这个句子whether引导同位语从句；In conclusion, I suggest that students should not use phones in the classroom这个句子suggest 建议，宾语从句用（should） do 。