Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last year, during the summer holiday, I found part-time job, worked in a toothbrush factory at night. Not until I experienced it did I realized that it was no easy job.I went to work when my parents were going to bed. On the morning, when my parents were going to work, I came to home to sleep. This backward schedule was very tough for me that I often felt tiring. But I am glad that I had this unforgettable experience. Not only is it fun to “rise and shine” along with the moon or stars, but also I had learned to appreciate the hard work of those which are working while the rest of us are sleeping.

Answer 1

【答案】1. found后加a

2. worked改成working

3. realized改成 realize

4. On改成In

5. 把came to home中的to去掉

6. very改成so

7. tiring改成tired

8. or改成and

9. had改成have

10. which改成who

【解析】1.句意：我找到了一份兼职工作。根据句意可知在found后加a。

2.此处是现在分词做伴随状态，表主动关系，故把worked改成working。

3. Not until I experienced it did I realized that it was no easy job此句是部分倒装，故把realized改成 realize 。

4.固定搭配：in the morning在上午，故把On改成In 。注意大写开头。

5. home在这里是副词，故把came to home中的to去掉。

6.此处是so---that---引导的结果状语从句，故把very改成so。

7.句意：我感到累。根据句意可知把 tiring改成tired 。

8.句意：月亮和星星。根据句意可知此处是并列的递进关系，故把 or改成and。

9.根据句意可知此处应该用现在完成时态，故把had改成have。

10.本句中those是先行词，指人，在后面的定语从句中做主语，故把which改成who。