Question

20．寒假临近，你的朋友正在计划寒假出游．他现在有两个选择难以决定：哈尔滨看雪、泰国看海．请你从经济、风景、人文、出行方式等方面进行比较，给出建议，并阐述理由．
注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
There is snow and ice everywhere and you are always in a white world．You must wear warm clothes．
到处都是冰雪，你总是在一个白色的世界里．你必须穿暖和的衣服．
高分句型二：
However，you can't speak English and can't communicate with the local people，which will make your trip very boring．
然而，你不会说英语，也不能和当地人交流，这会使你的旅行很无聊．

解答 Winter vacation is coming，it is very common for a family to travel together in this holiday season．You can  appreciate the beauty of nature which only exits in winter and enjoy skiing or other winter sports．But for the two choices of looking snow in Harbin and enjoying sea in Thailand is difficult to choose．There are some suggestions．
If you go to Harbin，there is snow and ice everywhere and you are always in a white world．You must wear warm clothes（高分句型一）．The most exciting thing is playing with snow．Skating is also very interesting there．And for Thailand，of course you will also be able to fly and enjoy the beautiful beaches．However，you can't speak English and can't communicate with the local people，which will make your trip very boring（高分句型二）．In addition，this will increase your security risk．For this reason，I suggest you go to Harbin to see the snow．
 All in all，the most important thing is that you have fun．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．