题目内容
5.儿童时代,我们常与同伴分享食物和玩具,随着年龄的增长,我们可以与人分享的东西更多.请你以Sharing为题,写一篇120词左右的英语短文,要点如下:1.与人分享的原因.
2.与人分享的内容(学习上、生活上、情感方面).
3.与人分享的体会.
注意:1.词数:120词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数.
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯
3.参考词汇:emotionally 情感上地
Sharing
We shared food and toys with our playmates when we were young.As we are growing older,we have more to share with others.
分析 这是一篇提纲类作文.根据题目要求可知用第一人称,时态以一般现在时态为主.内容主要包括:一 与人分享的原因;二 与人分享的内容;三 与人分享的体会.
高分句型:
1.We share because(because引导原因状语从句) every one owns different things and (and连接两个并列的状语从句的谓语动词)are different from others in many ways.
我们要分享,因为每个人拥有的不同,在许多方面和别人不同.
2.My life has become so colorful because of sharing,whether (whether引导让步状语从句,表示"无论")they are laughter or tears.
由于分享,我的生活变得如此多彩,无论是欢笑还是泪水.
解答 Possible version
Sharing
We shared food and toys with our playmates when we were young.As we are growing older,we have more to share with others.We share because every one owns different things and are different from others in many ways.【高分句型一】We share to win friendship and make progress together.(与人分享的原因)
I share a lot with my friends at school.We share books,good solutions to problems and learning experience and as a result we make progress together.In my daily life,we mainly share food at the school canteen,trying different foods for a meal.More importantly,we share happiness and sorrows in and out of the school campus.We even become emotionally dependent on each other.(与人分享的内容)
My life has become so colorful because of sharing,whether they are laughter or tears.【高分句型二】I have double happiness when I share joys; I have half misery when I share sorrows.(与人分享的体会)
点评 考查提纲类作文.
本文虽然是提纲类作文,但是很多内容需要发挥,这样的作文即需要内容的拓展,同时要避免偏题.因为如果论述与题目不符合题目,那么就会费力不讨好.
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