题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与 Peter几天前产生了误会。Peter的生日即将来临,Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系,修复友情,特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件:
1、礼物选择;
2、你的理由;
3、其他建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.____________
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Best wishes
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.
Best wishes
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:假设你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与 Peter几天前产生了误会。Peter的生日即将来临,Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系,修复友情,特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件:1、礼物选择;2、你的理由; 3、其他建议。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1. 词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。虚拟语气的完美使用:If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him;结果状语从句的使用:Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body;让步状语从句的合理使用:No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important.还有连接词的恰当运用使文章思路清晰,结构完整:As far as I know, In the meanwhile, Besides。