Question

【题目】某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。

1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；

2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；

3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。

注意：

1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. In reality, different students have different learning habits, which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly. Good habits always lead to high efficiency, while bad ones bring the opposite.

Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class. They think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better. If we find those materials interesting, we'll focus our attention on them for long. However, those dull lessons require our determination, self-controlling ability and confidence.

My classmates always call me "Mr. forgetful", because I cannot memorize those I have learnt. I know that it is because I don't spend some time in memorizing them after class. My teachers advise me to repeat the materials several times and read them aloud, which they think will help improve my memory.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，内容是用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。

【亮点说明】本文层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构，如定语从句different students have different learning habits, which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly.倒装句They think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better.等。