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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The winter holiday is coming, that makes me excited. I have been looking forward to relax myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. What wonderful a time I will have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I will be knocked down by a truck, fall off a tree, or fight about others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I have being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade him.

Answer 1

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【解析】that改为which

考查定语从句。分析句子The winter holiday is coming, that makes me excited.可知：寒假就要来了，这让我很兴奋。其中The winter holiday is coming, 是主句，that makes me excited 是用于修饰主句，在定语从句中只有关系词which才能修饰整个句子，关系that不能指代一整个句子。故把that改为which.

2.relax改为relaxing

考查固定用法。句意：我一直盼望着放松自己。Look forward to doing sth,为固定搭配，意为“盼望做某事”，其中to 为介词，后面如果是动词的话要跟doing，故把 relax改为relaxing。

3.movie改为movies

考查名词的复数。movie前有表示数量的词several（几个）， 可知要用复数，故把movie改为movies。

4.What改为How

考查名词从句。句意：寒假期间我会过得多么愉快啊！wonderful为形容词，修饰形容词的要用副词，而不能用名词，故把What改为How。

6.different改为differently

考查副词。分析句子my parents think different.可知，本句中的形容词different是修饰动词 think的，不能用形容词修饰动词，要用副词来修饰动词，故把different改为differently。

7.在go前添加to.

考查固定用法。 want sb to do sth为固定搭配，想要某人做某事，因此在 go 前添加to。

8.about改为with

考查介词。句意：他们担心我会被卡车撞倒，从树上掉下来，或者打架。和某人打架，为“fight with sb”，故把about改为with。

9.keeping改为kept

考查非谓语作宾语补足语。句意：我就像是关在笼子中的小鸟。分析句子I have being treated like a bird keeping in a cage.可知，a bird 是被关在笼中的，所以与keep是被动关系，不是主动关系，故把keeping改为kept。

10. him改为them

考查代词。句意：我会尽力说服他们的。根据前面的“my parents think differently.”可知，我的父母亲，是复数，因此要用them。因此把him改为them 。