题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,作为交换生去美国洛杉矶学习生活了两周。在此期间,你住在Brown夫妇家中,他们为你提供吃住行及旅行方面的帮助。请你给他们写一封感谢信,主要内容如下;1.表示感谢 2.表达感受 3 欢迎来访4 保持联系。
注意1 次数100左右 2 信的开头和结尾已经写好
Dear Mr and Mrs Brown,
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Faithfully yours,
Li Hua
【答案】I’m writing to you from my home in China. I returned home safe and sound . When thinking of the wonderful days I spent in Los Angeles, I just can’t help thinking of you .It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay there such a happy experience. I’ve learned so much ,not only English but also the culture .And I really enjoyed a great deal ,the fun and laughter we shared with each other .Thank you very much .I’ll always remember this trip as well as your kindness .
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you .I’ll be very glad to show you around. And you’ll surely have a pleasant visit here.
I’ll keep in touch and write to you later. please take care!
【解析】首先,这是一封书信,要求很明确,一共有四点:表达感谢;表达感受;欢迎来访;保持联系,考生应紧紧扣住这四点进行作文,文章的开头和结尾都已给出。
考生应注意以下几点:
1题目要求的四点内容必须全部涉及。字数要求在一百字左右,应合理分布每个部分的内容,详略得当。
2注意四个要求的先后顺序,合理分出段落,尤其是在表达感受时应该结合自己的相关典型经历,真实表达自己的感情。
【范文亮点】:
1优秀词汇:provide提供;experience经历;kindness友善(名词);convenient便利的
2高级词组:safeandsound安全着陆(副词);agreatdeal非常;aswellas也;keepintouch保持联系sucha加名词(如此的一个……)
3提分句式:Ijustcannothelpthinkingofyou.(cannothelpdoingsth忍不住做了……事);Itissokindofyoutodosth(你真是太……(因为做了这件事));Notonly,butalao(不仅……而且);Whenitisconvenientforyou(当你方便的时候)这些句子都会给整篇文章增色的。