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12．I was time to go home．"Remember to work on your class speeches for homework，"Miss Walker called，as everyone started talking and packing their school bags．Jenny felt sick．She hated having to read aloud in class．She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her．Once，when Jenny was reading out her holiday diary，Leewas even looking at his watch，a silver and blue one which seemed just magical．
Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school．He seemed so clever，and he had a certain sort of shining confidence．He was just one of those people who were good at everything．Jenny sighed．As she turned the corner，she saw Lee's watch lying right in the middle of the path．
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him，but shed didn't want to run after him．jenny bent down quickly，picked up the watch and ran home．On arriving home，Jenny put it on almost without thinking．She was surprised it fitted so well．She walked to the mirror and started practicing her speech．Words just flooded out of her．"I'm going to talk about swimming．I have been lucky．I've won lots of competitions．But when I'm in a race，I'm not really thinking about winning．I'm just loving the feeling of being in the water…"Jenny laughed with excitement．She walked across the room．She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence．Turning back to the mirror，Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass．The flashes of silver seemed almost magical．So maybe Lee's watch Lee's watch really DID have something magic about it．
The next day，as the lesson began，Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first．Nobody moved．Jenny slowly raised her arm．Before Miss Walker could say anything，there was a shout from behind．"She's stolen my watch!"Lee said angrily，"It went missing at school yesterday．"
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
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Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny，waiting for an explanation．Jennydidn't answer．How could she explain about the watchand its magic？No one could understand．No one could believe．"But I saw you wearing it yesterday，"Miss Walkergently reminded him．For a moment Leeremained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that．Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after thespeech．Everybody was puzzled and asked why．Jenny again was speechless．[78 words]
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At that，Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech．Jenny made her way to the platform with every confidence．Words began to flood outof her．"How could she make it？We've never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech．"Whispers went around the classroom，and even Miss Walker nodded with approval．Immediately Jenny finished her speech，a storm of applause erupted from the class．Relieved，Jenny told everyone the truth，and especially the magic of the watch．"But it's just an ordinary watch with no magic"，Lee announced．[80 words]．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech
詹妮松了一口气说，她在回家的路上发现了，决定演讲后返回．
高分句型二：
Immediately Jenny finished her speech，a storm of applause erupted from the class．
詹妮一结束她的演讲，从班上爆发了一阵暴风雨般的掌声．

解答 Possible version 1：
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny，waiting for an explanation．Jenny didn't answer．How could she explain about the watch and its magic？No one could understand．No one could believe．"But I saw you wearing it yesterday，"Miss Walker gently reminded him．For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that．Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech（高分句型一）．Everybody was puzzled and asked why．Jenny again was speechless．[78 words]
 Possible version 2：
At that，Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first．Jenny made her way to the platform with every confidence．Words began to flood out of her．"How could she make it？We've never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech．"Whispers went around the classroom，and even Miss Walker nodded with approval．Immediately Jenny finished her speech，a storm of applause erupted from the class（高分句型二）．Relieved，Jenny told everyone the truth，and especially the magic of the watch．"But it's just an ordinary watch with no magic"，Lee announced．[80 words]

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．