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15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you gave me．I was a perfectly stranger when reaching this city．Once I lost myself for not know the way in a downtown street，although I stopped to ask some people for help．As you knew，this is the first time for me to come up to this big city．
I bought a guidebook，and there were still difficulties in going round the city．The streets and shops puzzled me too much that I would rather stay indoors．It is your valuable guidance which has enabled me go about the city without losing myself．Now I begin to know how to take the proper buses．Yesterday I went to downtown with some of my schoolmates for shopping．
Lessons will begin after a few days．I will come over to see you some days next week and tell you everything that has happened to me．
分析 文章是一封感谢信．我刚来这个城市，在市区容易迷路．尽管买了导游册，可还是对街道和商场难辨东西．非常感谢你的帮助，我现在可以去商场购物了，下周我去看你，告诉你发生的一切．
解答 I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you gave me．
I was a perfectly stranger when reaching this city．
perfect
Once I lost myself for not know the way in a downtown street，although I stopped to ask some people for help．
knowing
As you knew，this is the first time for me to come up to this big city．
know
I bought a guidebook，and there were still difficulties in going round the city．
but
The streets and shops puzzled me too much that I would rather stay indoors．
so
It is your valuable guidance which has enabled me∧go about the city without losing myself．
that 加to
Now I begin to know how to take the proper buses．
Yesterday I went to downtown with some of my schoolmates for shopping．
去掉
Lessons will begin after a few days．
in
I will come over to see you some days next week and tell you everything that has happened to me．
day
1．perfectly改为perfect．修饰名词要用形容词．
2．know改为knowing．题干中know位于介词for后，要用动名词形式．
3．knew改为know．文章讲述的一般事实，要用一般现在时态．
4．and改为but．句意表达的是转折关系．
5．too改为so．短语搭配，so…that…如此…以致．
6．which改为that．强调句型，it is…that/who…
7．加to．短语搭配，enable sb to do sth让某人能够做某事．
8．to去掉．downtown是副词，不需要添加介词．
9．after改为in．表示将来的时间，多久以后，要用in，after用在过去时态中．
10．days改为day．短语搭配，some day某一天，some days一些天．
点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．
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63．Lily is a girl who likes some romantic things．She always likes to watch a film filled with love stories．B
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62．Jack is a boy who lacks perseverance in his study，so he wants to watch a film including a person who gets success by his long-time efforts．C
63．Lily is a girl who likes some romantic things．She always likes to watch a film filled with love stories．B
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| 42．A．lost | B．injured | C．escaped | D．freed |
| 43．A．weak | B．sick | C．tired | D．frightened |
| 44．A．threatened | B．scratched | C．witnessed | D．approached |
| 45．A．Before | B．Since | C．While | D．As |
| 46．A．gently | B．slightly | C．toughly | D．voluntarily |
| 47．A．house | B．garage | C．woods | D．backyard |
| 48．A．row | B．mouthful | C．handful | D．basket |
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| 50．A．absorbed | B．engaged | C．satisfied | D．interested |
| 51．A．ingredient | B．label | C．restriction | D．bandage |
| 52．A．freezing | B．warm | C．hot | D．normal |
| 53．A．could | B．would | C．should | D．might |
| 54．A．turned up | B．turned on | C．turned off | D．turned out |
| 55．A．persistence | B．recognition | C．sequence | D．sacrifice |
| 56．A．appetite | B．security | C．awareness | D．trust |
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Reliable fully insured car．
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C．To encourage more people to involve．
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| Company Name | Sublime Science |
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