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18.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文.文中共有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分.
One day,a young man,whom couldn't get back home,came into my office to ask forhelp.He said his mother was disabled.His phone had stolen with his wallet and he hadn't contacted her for the past two days.The young man really looked worrying.I asked him to wait outside unless I finished my work.After work I drove him all the way home.We arrive at his mother's house at 10:30p.m.She was in a wheelchair and she answered a door.I saw tears in her eye as she thanked for me.I just hoped that if my son experienced nothing similar,someone would be nicely enough to bring him home.

分析 文章讲述了一个感人的故事.一位年轻人回不了家,来到我的办公室求助.他说他的母亲有残疾,他的手机和钱包被偷了,他已经两天没和他的母亲联系了.下班后我开车送他回去,到了他母亲的家里已经是晚上了,他的母亲开了门,眼含泪水.我希望如果有一天我的孩子遇到这样的事,也能有好心人带他回家.

解答 One day,a young man,whom couldn't get back home,came into my office to ask forhelp.He said his mother was disabled.His phone had∧stolen with his wallet and he hadn't contacted her for the past two days.The young man really looked worrying.I asked him to wait outside unless I finished my work.After work I drove him all the way home.We arrive at his mother's house at 10:30p.m.She was in a wheelchair and she answered a door.I saw tears in her eye as she thanked for me.I just hoped that if my son experienced nothing similar,someone would be nicely enough to bring him home.
详解:
1.whom改为who.句中couldn't get back home是修饰man的一个非限制性定语从句;关系词指代先行词man,且在从句中作主语,要用who来引导;
2.加been.句中steal与主语his phone之间构成动宾关系,要用被动;句意表达的动作是过去的过去,要用过去完成时态的被动语态;
3.worrying改为worried.句中worry作系动词look的宾语,要用形容词形式;句中worry修饰的是人的感受,要用过去分词来表示;现在分词表示物的特征或状态;
4.unless改为until.句意表达的是动作wait的持续,不是表示条件;  
5.arrive改为arrived.文章讲述的是过去发生的动作,要用一般过去时态;     
6.a改为the.句意表达的是特指,answered the door开门;
7.eye改为eyes.她的眼睛有两个,要用复数;    
8.for去掉.thank是及物动词,后面直接带宾语,表示感谢的对象;thank for sth为某事而感谢;     
9.nothing改为something.句意表达的是肯定,如果我的孩子经历同样的事情;    
10.nicely-nice.句中nice作系动词的表语,要用形容词形式.

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识.常考的知识点有:名词(单复数错误),动词(时态,语态,搭配,转换),代词(指代错误),形容词和副词(转换,比较等级),连词(and,but,or)等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误,如本来用her,却用了his等等.解题是要注意:以句子为单位,以动词为中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的错误;找错误要以动词为主,动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分.

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