题目内容
13.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last night,I went to my friend's birthday party,where I make some new friends.We talked happily,and one of my new friend showed us the pictures of the places he had been visited.We were extreme envious because all of you had the dream to travel to different places,but none of us had taken action.He told us that we had the energy to see the world and we should carry out our travel plan once we had an idea.That he told us is right,and most of the young people haven't realized this.We should do what we want to do instead of waste our youth.
分析 昨天晚上,我去参加了一个朋友的生日晚会.在晚会上遇到一个朋友,他给我们看了他旅行过的地方的照片.我们都很羡慕,因为我们都梦想着去很多地方旅行,但都没采取行动.这位朋友告诉我们一旦制定了旅行计划就应该执行.他所说的是正确的,但是大部分年轻人没有意识到这一点.我们应该做我们想做的,而不能浪费青春.
解答 Last night,I went to my friend's birthday party,where I make some new friends.We talked happily,and one of my new friend showed us the pictures of the places he had been visited.We were extreme envious because all of you had the dream to travel to different places,but none of us had taken action.He told us that we had the energy to see the world and∧we should carry out our travel plan once we had an idea.That he told us is right,and most of the young people haven't realized this.We should do what we want to do instead of waste our youth.
详解:
1.make改为made; 考查动词的时态;本文讲的是"昨天"晚上发生的事情,故用一般过去时.
2.friend 改为friends;考查名词,one of 后面要跟名词的复数形式表示一个范围,故friend 改为friends.
3.去掉been;考查动词的语态,分析句子结构可知,he had visited是一个定语从句,先行词the places是动词visited的宾语,从句用主动语态,故去掉been.
4.extreme 改为extremely; 考查副词,这里需要修饰的是形容词envious,故用副词形式extremely.
5.you 改为us;考查人称代词,结合上下文分析句意为"我们都很羡慕,因为我们所有的人都梦想着去不同的地方去旅行",所以要把you 改为us.
6.and we 之间加that;考查并列结构,这里and连接两个并列的宾语从句,这里用that引导宾语从句,与前面的that we had the energy to see the world构成并列关系.
7.an 改为the; 考查冠词,根据句意"我们一旦有了旅行的想法就应该去执行"得知此处要用定冠词the表示特指,the idea特指"旅行的想法".
8.That 改为What;考查主语从句,从句中动词told缺少宾语,把 That 改为What作主语从句中的宾语.
9.and 改为but;考查连词,结合上下文分析,前面讲到"他所说的是正确的",后面又讲"大部分年轻人没有意识到这一点",可知前后应为转折关系,故用but.
10.waste 改为wasting;考查动名词,介词of后面要跟名词或动名词作它的宾语,构成介宾结构.
点评 短文改错当中,首先要从整体掌握短文大意,结合上下文语境并充分运用平时掌握的基础知识,习惯用法,短语搭配等对短文进行分析,以便找出文中的错误所在,并加以修正.
--- !There will be loads of other opportunities.( )
A. | Well done | B. | What a pity | C. | Cheer up | D. | All right |
A. | followed | B. | would follow | C. | had followed | D. | should follow |