Question

【题目】本班举行班会对如何保持健康问题进行了讨论。请根据以下信息写篇短文。

1. 注意均衡膳食。多吃鱼、肉、豆类等，特别是新鲜蔬菜和水果，因为它们富含纤维素和维生素；

2. 经常参加体育锻炼以强身健体；

3. 保证充足的睡眠。不要熬夜，每天至少睡8个小时。

4．总之，健康的饮食和好的生活习惯是我们保持健康的好方法。

[写作要求]

1. 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容

2. 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文

参考词汇：富含纤维素和维生素：be rich in fibre and vitamins

强身健体：build up/strengthen one’s body

【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

We have a class meeting about how to keep healthy. The following is some advice.

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Answer 1

【答案】

We have a class meeting about how to keep healthy. The following is some advice. First, we should have a balanced diet and eat right food, such as fish, meat, beans, especially more fresh fruit and vegetables because they are rich in fibre and vitamins. Second, we should take regular exercise to build up our bodies. What’s more, having enough sleep is very important. So we should have at least eight hours of sleeping every day and not stay up too late. In a word, healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于说明文。根据题目要求和提示信息来介绍怎样从饮食和生活习惯上来保持身体健康。写作时注意以下几点：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2.保证句子结构准确，信息完整，内容连贯。题目规定只能用五句话表达内容，力求简洁明了。3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，短小精悍，层次分明。用First，Second,What’s more, In a word,使文章结构清晰，层次分明，一目了然；多用长句，使文章简洁明了，同时充分表达信息；What’s more, having enough sleep is very important.动名词短语作主语，句子结构平衡，突出重点；First, we should have a balanced diet and eat right food, such as fish, meat, beans, especially more fresh fruit and vegetables because they are rich in fibre and vitamins.将众多短句结合成一个长句，句意连贯，轻松易懂。