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【题目】国内某家英文报纸设有一个求助信箱(letters to Dr. Helper)。请根据一份学生现状中列出的部分信息,以高三学生王勇的名义,用英语给Dr. Helper写一封短信(写信时间为2003年2月16日)。

学生现状:1、每日在校时间9小时;

2、每日作业时间34小时;

3、每日课外活动时间几乎没有;

4、每日睡眠时间不足。

负担过重原因:考试压力大;作业多,家长期望高

生词:负担过重overload 压力pressure 期望expectation

注意:1、书信格式要正确;

2、表达要点要全,不能逐句翻译;

3、词数120左右。

Dear Dr. Helper,

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【答案】

Dear Dr. Helper,

I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to stay at school for 9 hours to have lessons and spend at least 3 to 4 hours doing my homework. We teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do what we want. Besides, we even don’t have enough sleep.

There seem to be 3 causes about the overload: the pressure of examinations; too much homework and the high expectations from the parents. We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we won’t have the chance to go to university.

I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk to. I am looking forward to your advice.

Your sincerely

Wang Yong

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇应用文写作(求助信),写作内容与学生日常生活和学习有关。写作要点为:现状和三大负担过重原因(现象),如何减负?成文时要注意:1.文章主要用第一人称;2.时态:现在时3.题目提示的内容要点要齐全;4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;5.注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制,120单词左右。

【亮点说明】文章格式正确,内容齐全,结构合理,使用高级句子。I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Because引导原因状语从句;We teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do what we want.并列句,but表示转折;We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we won’t have the chance to go to university.宾语从句和条件状语从句完美结合;I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk to.动词不定式目的状语;另外,Besides的运用为文章增色添彩。

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Cheating(舞弊) is when a person misleads, deceives or acts dishonestly on purpose. 1 . If a basketball team is for kids under 8,it's cheating for a 9-year-old play on the team. At school, in addition to cheating on a test, a kid might cheat by stealing someone else's idea for a science project.2 .This kind of cheating is called plagiarizing (抄袭).

3 . Jeff is doing it by sneaking(暗中的) answers to a test. And it's also cheating to break the rules of a game or contest or to pretend something is yours when it isn't. When people cheat, it's not fair to other people. It's tempting(诱惑人的) to cheat because it makes difficult things seem easy, like getting all the right answers on the rest. 4 , and it won't help on the next test------unless the person cheats again.

5 . They want to get good grades but hate hard work. Other kids might feel like they can't pass the test without cheating. Even though there seems to be a "good reason" for cheating, cheating isn't a good idea.

A. Some kids cheat because they're lazy.

B. Cheating can happen in a lot of different ways.

C. But it doesn't solve the problem of not knowing the material(材料).

D. Some kids cheat once and feel so bad that they never do it again.

E. For kids, cheating may happen at school, at home, or while playing a sport.

F. There are plenty of reasons why a kid shouldn't cheat, but some kids have already cheated.

G. Kids may also cheat by copying a book report off the Internet and handing it in as it's his or her original (原先的)work.

【题目】Jimmy is an automotive mechanic, but he lost his job a few months ago. He has good heart, but always feared applying for a new job.

One day, he gathered up all his strength and decided to attend a job interview. His appointment was at 10 am and it was already 8:30. While waiting for a bus to the office where he was supposed to the interviewed, he saw an elderly man wildly kicking the tyre of the car. Obviously there was something wrong with the car. Jimmy immediately went up to lend him a hand. When Jimmy finished working on the car, the old man asked him how much he should pay for the service. Jimmy said there was no need to pay him; he just helped someone in need, and he had to rush for an interview. Then the old man said, “Well, I could take you to the office for your interview. It’s the least I could do. Please. I insist.” Jimmy agreed.

Upon arrival, Jimmy found a long line of applications waiting to be interviewed. Jimmy still had some grease(油腻物) on him after the car repair, but he did not have much time to wash it off or have a change of shirt. One by one, the applicants left the interviewer’s office with disappointed look on their faces. Finally his name was called. The interviewer was sitting on a large chair facing the office window. Rocking the chair back and forth, he asked, “Do you really need to be interviewed?” Jimmy’s heart sank. “With the way I look now, how could I possibly pass this interview?” he thought to himself.

Then the interviewer turned the chair and to Jimmy’s surprise, it was the old man he helped earlier in the morning. It turned out he was the General Manager of the company.

“Sorry I had to keep you waiting, but I was pretty sure I made the right decision to have you as part of our workforce before you even stepped into the office. I just know you’d be a trustworthy worker. Congratulations!” Jimmy sat down and they shared a cup of well-deserved coffee as he landed himself a new job.

1Why did Jimmy apply for a new job?

A. He wanted a higher position

B. He was bored with his job

C. He was out of work

D. He hoped to find a better boss

2What did Jimmy see on the way to the interview?

A. An old man’s car broke down

B. A wild man was pushing a car

C. A terrible accident happened

D. A friend’s car had a flat tyre

3Why did the old man offer Jimmy a ride?

A. He was thankful to Jimmy

B. He needed a traveling companion

C. He always helped people in need

D. He was also to be interviewed

4How did Jimmy feel on hearing the interviewer’s question?

A. He was sorry for the other applicants

B. The interviewer was very rude

C. He regretted helping the old man

D. There was no hope for him to get the job

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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

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2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

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【题目】Are you truly happy? Do you ever know what it means to be happy and what it takes to achieve happiness? __【1】_ The following are a few tips that I follow to create happiness in my life.

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