Question

【题目】假设你是小明，请根据你校美化校园的规划，用英语给你在美国的笔友Peter写一封信，介绍该规划。信的主要内容如下：

规划目的： 美化校园、净化空气；创造良好的学习和生活环境

规划内容： 种植花草树木；建一个植物园，供参观、实践；建一个小花园，供休息、读书；建几座名人雕塑，激励师生

注意：1．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

2．词数：100词左右。

3．参考词汇：雕塑—statue (n.) 植物园—botanical garden (n.)

Dear Peter,

I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.___________________________________.

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Welcome to our school if you have any chance.

Yours,

Xiao Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I'd like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.

The purposes of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresher, and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in.

According to the program, we will plant different kinds of trees, flowers and grass in and around our school. A botanical garden will be built for us to visit and practice in. Besides, we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a rest. What's more, some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder. Don't you think it a wonderful program?

Welcome to our school if you have any chance.

Yours,

Wang Xiaoming

【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.通篇以一般将来时为主。2.要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3.注意语气。要注意语气应该比较恳切。难点是计划，一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑，尽量详细。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。写这部分内容时，学生可以采取简单句和复合句结合的方法。

【范文亮点】：

文章开头说明来信意图，引出话题，简明扼要。第二段介绍这个计划计划的好处。第三段提出更加具体的计划。末尾采用问句（“Don't you think it a wonderful program?”）让文章句式有变化，同时增强说服力。也运用了turn into、According to等高级单词和短语让文章看起来更有料。使用Besides、What's more等连接词，文章更连贯。而且题目中所给的提示词都有用到，符合出题人的意图。