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5．石嘴山市三中要求每个班级每学期举行"每月之星"（ Star of the Month） 评选活动．同学们就如何当选为"每月之星"而开展讨论：
有些同学认为待人友善，尊重、关心他人等；还有同学认为应该视班级为大家庭，热心班级活动，工作负责等．请客观的介绍讨论情况及你的观点．
注意：1．短文须包括所有要点，要适度发挥．
     2．开头已为你写好，但不计人总词数．
     3．注意书写工整、卷面整洁．
4．词数：120词左右．
Most students desire to be the Star of the Month，but not everyone can get it．What is the secret to it？
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Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息石嘴山市三中要求每个班级每学期举行"每月之星"（ Star of the Month） 评选活动．同学们就如何当选为"每月之星"而开展讨论，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：有些同学认为待人友善，尊重、关心他人等；还有同学认为应该视班级为大家庭，热心班级活动，工作负责等．请客观的介绍讨论情况及你的观点．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：in a friendly way以一种友好的方式；are supposed to应该；regardless of不管，不顾；take an active part in积极参加； In my opinion以我的观点来看；be strict with 对…要求严格；make every effort to 不遗余力地去做； not only，but also不仅，而且
Others think we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to do what we can do for the class regardless of our personal interests whenever necessary．（高分句型一）
While taking an active part in all our class activities，we should work responsibly．（高分句型二）
 In my opinion，to be the Star of Campus，we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports，music，painting，and social services and so on．（高分句型三）

解答 Most students desire to be the Star of theMonth，but not everyone can get it．What is the secret to it？
        Some students believe that we should act towards others in a friendly way，and show respect and concern for others．Others think we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to do what we can do for the class regardless of our personal interests whenever necessary．（高分句型一）While taking an active part in all our class activities，we should work responsibly．（高分句型二）（不同观点）
        In my opinion，to be the Star of Campus，we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports，music，painting，and social services and so on．（高分句型三）（个人观点）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．