Question

20．假如你班最近进行了一次班会，讨论怎样使英语学习变成一件快乐的事．请你根据下面所提示的信息，为某英语网站写一篇短文，谈谈你们的讨论情况并提出你的建议．
讨论情况：1、课内互动  2、课外活动  3、运用英语
注意：
1．对所给药店逐一陈述，不要简单翻译；  2．词数100左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：互动的interactive
Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达要求根据表格提示信息为网站写一篇关于快乐学习英语的短文．从表格信息可以看出文章应该分为两部分．第一部分介绍讨论的情况，其中包括课内师生、生生的互动情况和课外活动，比如演讲或者晚会的进行情况，再有就是关于如何运用英语等三方面要点．第二部分是提出自己的建议．在写作时要充分发挥想象，以使文章内容更加充实．还要使用恰当的连接词把各个要点有机联系起来，使内容连贯，语言通顺．在叙述讨论结果时要使用一般过去时，而提出建议时要使用一般现在时．
【亮点说明】本篇范文结构清晰，首段介绍讨论情况，第二段提出自己的建议，最后做出总结．在文中作者使用了表示顺序的词first of all，secondly、thirdly 这使文章内容更具有层次性．In this way、for example、all in all 等短语的出现也使文章的过渡更为自然．此外，作者还使用了让步状语从句whether they are English teachers or classmates，主语从句what we need is more free time and more space．宾语从句 Most students believe that there are many ways to do so等多种句式结构，增加了文章的得分点．
First of all，we can have more interactive activities in class，such as discussions，interviews，story-telling and role-play．（高分句型一）
Thirdly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．These ideas sound reasonable and practical．（高分句型二）
All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．（高分句型三）

解答 Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．Most students believe that there are many ways to do so．
      First of all，we can have more interactive activities in class，such as discussions，interviews，story-telling and role-play．（高分句型一） In this way，we can have more fun learning English．Secondly，we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech contest and English evenings．Thirdly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．These ideas sound reasonable and practical．（高分句型二）
       From my experience，there are many other interesting and relaxing ways．For example，we can listen to English songs and watch English movies．We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen-friends on the Internet．All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．