题目内容
【题目】假如你叫郑义,是你校的学生会主席,最近你了解到一些同学的不文明行为,请你就此事给你校的同学写一封倡议信,呼吁大家遵纪守规,建设平安校园。内容包括:
1. 不在校园、楼道追逐打闹.
2. 同学之间和睦相处,不打架斗殴.
3. 告别陋习,文明待人.
4. 遇到困难,或紧急事件机智解决,并及时向老师反映或报警,打110/120(急救)/119(火警).
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is like our home, because we live and study here. In order to make ourselves safe, we students should obey the school rules.
First, we shouldn’t chase each other in the hallway and in the school yard. Instead of fighting with others, we should get on well with others. Secondly, when you dicuss with others, try to be calm and patient to make sure you speak politely. Last but not the least important, ask the teachers for help when you are in trouble. When you meet someone asking you for money, for example, or you are rounded up by several rude students, learn to protect yourself wisely, then report to the teacher or call 110/120 bravely in time. As the chairman of the Student Union, I appeal that students break away from these bad habits and be polite to others.
I hope we have a good time every day!
Yours,
Zhengyi
【解析】
试题分析:本文就校园安全问题写一封倡议信,倡议同学们遵纪守法,文明待人,学会保护自己。应该用一般现在时,用should之类的情态动词表建议和要求,注意人称的一致性。同时尽量用比较高级的词汇和连接词以提高文章的档次。
【亮点说明】本文多用should和shouldn’t表建议,同时用了Instead of,make sure, break away from等短语和you meet someone asking you for money中的非谓语动词短语asking you for money等。