Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

When an English traveler, who spent a few week in Sweden, was about to return to home, he found he had only enough money left to get a ticket to England. Since it was only two-day voyage, he believed he can get home without eating anything. He final bought a ticket with that little money and went to board the ship. He closed his ears to the sound of the lunch bell or refused to go to the place where people had his dinner when dinnertime came. Therefore, he couldn’t stand this any longer and went to the dining hall, enjoy the last meal on the ship. He then said, “Waiter, brings me the bill.” “Oh, meals are included in the ticket.” said the waiter.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】week →weeks

【2】去掉return后的to

【3】two-day前加a

【4】can→ could

【5】final →finally

【6】or→ and

【7】his → their

【8】Therefore → However

【9】enjoy→ enjoying

【10】brings →bring

【解析】

试题分析：本短文是一个故事。一个英国旅行者，在瑞典游玩几天之后，只剩下买一张回国的机票的钱了。于是，他想着可以两天不吃东西。可是，他实在饿的撑不住了，于是他去食堂吃了最后的饭。在他问服务员要账单时，结果被告知餐费包含在机票里。

【1】week →weeks 考查名词。week是可数名词，a few：一些，修饰可数名词复数形式，故week用复数形式。

【2】去掉return后面的to 考查介词。home用作副词，前面不用加介词，故把to去掉。

【3】two-day前加a 考查冠词。journey：行程，表示泛指意义，句子意思为：因为这只是一次为期两天的行程，故要在two-day前加a。

【4】can→ could 考查动词时态。全文讲述的是发生在过去的一个故事，用的是一般过去时，故把can改为could。

【5】final →finally 考查副词。修饰动词bought用副词，故把形容词final改为副词finally。

【6】or→ and 考查连词。句子意思为：他不去听吃午饭的铃声，并且吃饭时间到的时候，他拒绝去人们吃饭的地方。并列关系，用连词and，故将or改为and。

【7】his → their 考查代词。这里指代的应该是复数名词people，用复数意义的物主代词their。

【8】Therefore → However 考查副词。根据理解，前后句之间为转折关系，用表示转折关系的副词however。

【9】enjoy→ enjoying 考查非谓语动词。用分词短语作状语，动词enjoy和逻辑主语he之间是逻辑上的主动关系，用现在分词短语，故将enjoy改为enjoying。

【10】brings →bring 考查祈使句。在祈使句中，动词用原形，故将brings改为bring。