Question

【题目】假定你是李华得知英国牛津大学面向海外高中生举办暑期夏令营。请你写一封英文信，咨询相关情况，内容包括：

1.活动安排及费用；

2.住宿情况；

3.索取报名表及相关资料。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm Li Hua,a Senior Three student from China.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm Li Hua,a Senior Three student from China.Greatly interested in your summer club intended for international students,I'm writing to inquire about the program.

First,would you please tell me the specific time of the program and how long it will last,so that I can properly schedule my time.Second,what core lectures and social activities does it offer to students?Are there any English cultural lessons and cultural tours?Besides,I also wonder how much I have to pay for the program and whether accommodations will be provided for the participants.I would appreciate it very much if you could send me the application forms and some related materials that provide further information regarding the program.

Thank you for your time.I am looking forward to getting your reply!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇书信，原文所给观点需要做适当补充，可以用自己的实际情况进行说明，等方面展开。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。