Question

【题目】假如你是李明，你的外教老师Tom来信询问你校和谐校园的创建情况。请你根据以下内容提示，简要回复此次活动给你校带来的主要变化：

①校园环境的变化；

②同学、师生关系的变化;

③学习氛围的变化；

④自己的感受；

参考词汇：harmonious 和谐的 environment 环境 attractive 吸引人的；迷人的。

注意：词数100左右，信的格式和开头语已为你写好，不计入总次数。

Dear Tom,

I’m writing to tell you something about the harmonious school activity, which makes many changes on our campus.

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Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m writing to tell you something about the harmonious school activity, which makes many changes on our campus.

As is known to all, a harmonious school life is important to high school students. Firstly, the environment in our school gets better and better. With more and more trees and flowers planted, our school looks more beautiful. We can have a good rest and put our heart into study. What’s more, the atmosphere among people is very harmonious. Students get along well with each other. We do respect our teacher and they also do love us.Our school is just like a big family. We will have a good mood and enjoy being together.

In my opinion, I think we should try our best to build a harmonious school life. I like studying in such a beautiful school. Let’s do what we can from now on to make our school more and more attractive.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】试题分析：

本文是给外教老师Tom回信，向他介绍和谐校园的创建情况以及此次活动给你校带来的主要变化。文章给出了提纲，成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。完整陈述提纲中的四个方面内容。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：as放句首引导非限制性定语从句As is known to all, a harmonious school life is important to high school students.；with的独立结构With more and more trees and flowers planted, our school looks more beautiful.；助动词do表示强调的用法We do respect our teacher and they also do love us.；使用宾语从句Let’s do what we can from now on to make our school more and more attractive.。2.使用了过渡词语：Firstly，What’s more 等。3.使用了重要短语：put … into把…投入到；get along well with与…相处融洽；In my opinion在我看来。