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【题目】假定你是李华,准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按照要求写一篇短文,主要内容包括:1.乐观的人生态度;2.努力学习;3.参加体育锻炼。
注意:1.词数120词左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头已为你写好。
We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things.
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【答案】We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things.To begin with,we should develop a positive attitude to life.Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.We should be brave in front of difficulties.Moreover,we must study hard because knowledge is power.If we have the power.We can help to build our country and enjoy life better.In order to study well,we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.We can go running,play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.In short,I’m convinced that if we do those things well,we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.
【解析】范文涵盖了所有写作要点,也进行了适当的拓展,并注意语句的连贯性;范文还使用了原因状语从句、条件从句、目的状语从句等语法知识,具备较强的语言运用能力。
语法方面:原因状语从句because knowledge is power;条件状语从句①If we have the power,②if we do those things well;目的状语从句so that we can keep fit;固定句型I’m convinced that...等,显示了较强的语法功底,也使作文句式变得多样;
篇章结构方面:范文注意使用to begin with,moreover,in short等来衔接句子和段落,使表达变得更有条理;
短语和搭配方面:范文使用to begin with,an attitude to,consist of,not only...but also,in front of,keep fit,in short,in order to,be able to do,grow up,happily and healthily等短语和搭配,使作文的内容变得充实。