Question

9．DIY（Do It Yourself） 现在越来越得到青睐．你愿意选择这一方式吗？请说出你的理由．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
When a student has difficulty in doing①his homework and try asking②his parents about that，his parents would say，"Do it yourself．"
当一个学生做作业有困难，并试图询问他的父母时，他的父母会说，"自己动手．"
①has/have difficulty in doing sth．意为：做某事有困难．
②try doing sth．意为：尝试着做某事．
句型二：
They buy the components of a computer①instead of②a ready-made one from a computer market and make them up③．
他们从计算机市场购买的是计算机的零件而不是现成的，然后将它们组装起来．
①the components of a computer指计算机的零件．
②instead of：代替，而不是．
③make up：组成．

解答 Do It Yourself
With the development of the society，DIY is becoming more and more popular．（概述人们对DIY的态度）But first it only meant that one should do its things itself．When a student has difficulty in doing his homework and try asking his parents about that，his parents would say，"Do it yourself．"【高分句型一】That means you can't rely on others．（举例说明DIY曾经的含义）But nowadays DIY has a new meaning that one wants to do things by its own．For example，some people would like to make a computer themselves．They buy the components of a computer instead of a ready-made one from a computer market and make them up．【高分句型二】They enjoy their work and it usually costs less．（举例说明现在DIY所被赋予的新含义）
In my opinion，that DIY is popular is because it can reveal one's abilities and skills．You can imagine when a person completes a DIY，how happy he is!What's more，DIY costs less and can help a person save money．So，I like DIY too．（表达作者对DIY的态度）

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