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【题目】假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jim将作为交换生来中国学习,他来信向你询问如何更好地融入到寄宿家庭和应该注意的餐桌礼仪方面的问题,请你就此内容给他写一封回信。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to know you will come to China as an exchange student. Here are my suggestions about your behavior in a Chinese family.
As far as I am concerned, helping your host family with some housework is definitely an effective approach to engaging with them. Furthermore, a warm and harmonious atmosphere can be created. When it comes to table manners, we often let the seniors eat first to show respect for them. Besides, you should avoid tapping the bowls with chopsticks, which is impolite. In fact, the best policy is “When in Rome, do as the Romans do”.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲作文。李华的美国朋友Jim将作为交换生来中国学习,来信向你询问如何更好地融入到寄宿家庭和应该注意的餐桌礼仪方面的问题。信的内容要包括写信的原因,忠告的内容等。文章要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性。
对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌,使读者容易接受。
亮点分析:本文第一段开门见山地表明写作的意图,给一些关于在中国家庭寄宿的忠告。第二段以一常用的短语“As far as I am concerned”,以一个动名词作主语的方式很好地开头:helping your host family with some housework is definitely an effective approach to engaging with them.运用了被动语态:a warm and harmonious atmosphere can be created。 同时也恰当地运用了定语从句:you should tapping the bowls with chopsticks, which is impolite. 最后本段运用一句习语 When in Rome, do as the Romans do(入乡随俗)结束了本段。本文中还运用了许多连词如“Furthermore …Besides,…In fact,”使文章条理清晰。同时还使用了一些固定短语如avoid doing ,Look forward to seeing you soon等和固定句型“ When it comes to table manners,”(当谈到),给文章增添了魅力及可读性。
总之本文结构完整,布局合理,得简明扼要。文中使用了多种句式,主动语态和被动语态交替使用,并用恰当地运用了非谓语及固定句式,增加了文章亮点。