Question

【题目】假如你是校学生会成员，校学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会，要在全校通知此事，请你依据如下要点写一则通知：

目的：欢迎来访的美国朋友；

组织者：学生会；

时间：10月18日（星期六）晚上7：30，活动大概持续一个半小时；

地点：学校体育馆

活动内容：音乐、舞蹈、唱歌、游戏、交换小礼品；

参加人员：所有学生，特别是英语俱乐部的成员。

要求：请包装好礼品、签名并在包装外面写上祝愿词；准时参加。

注意： 1．词数120字左右；开头和结尾已经给出。

2．内容应包括以上要点，但不要逐字翻译，要组织成一篇通顺连贯的短文。

参考词汇：交换礼品 exchange of gifts 包装 wrap up

Notice

We are glad to ________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

The Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】

We are glad to inform you that the Students’ Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, October 18, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the school gym. It will begin at 7:30 p.m. and last about one and a half hours. There will be music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. All the students are welcome to attend the party, especially those who are members of English club.

You are required to bring along a small gift for this purpose. What’s more, remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes.

Please be on time. We are sure there is a lot of fun.

Thank you for your attention.

The Students’ Union

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据所给要点，写一则通知，将学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办晚会的消息通告全校。写作要点有：举办晚会的目的；晚会组织者；晚会的时间、地点；活动内容；参加人员；要求等，所写作文必须涵盖所有的要点内容，不能有遗漏；词数在120词左右，开头和结尾不计入总词数；注意使用参考词汇。

亮点说明：范文使用了一般将来时和宾语从句inform you that the Students’ Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening与We are sure there is a lot of fun.；定语从句who are members of English club等，使作文句式多样，错落有致；

范文使用了一些固定搭配和词组：are required to do；for this purpose；what’s more；wrap it up；on time等，充实了作文内容；

范文还注意使用and, especially, what’s more等衔接句子和段落，使作文结构显得更加紧凑。