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【题目】玫瑰市上星期发生强烈的地震，灾情严重，各地纷纷向玫瑰市伸出援手。学校将举办一场慈善义卖会,为灾区人民募集善款。假定你是班长李华，请你写一封书面通知，通知全班同学参加，要点包括：

1.活动背景：玫瑰市受灾情况介绍

2.活动目的：通过义卖筹集善款帮助受灾人民

3.内容：慈善物品拍卖，义演。

4.时间:本周六下午14:30

5.地点：学校操场。

注意：（1）须包括以上主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；

（2）词数：120左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）参考词汇：玫瑰市 Rose City 慈善义卖会 charity bazaar 义演 charity performance

Dear classmates,

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【答案】Dear classmates,

I’m here to announce that there is going to be charity bazaar held by our school, which is meant for the people seriously afflicted by the earthquake that happened the week before in Rose City.

As is known to us all, the earthquake has flattened numerous houses and cracked countless roads, resulting in a formidable situation where a large number of people are reduced to bitter sufferings. It is urgent for us to do something for them. Therefore, we plan to hold a charity bazaar where various items donated by us students will be on sale to raise money for the people in need. There is going to be a singing concert as well. It is on the playground at 2:30 pm this Saturday that we will gather together to make this meaningful event happen.

Come and join us. We would be glad to see you then.

【解析】本文属于提纲作文。本文是在写一书面通知，即以书面的形式表达通知的内容，其特点是：措辞较严谨，句子结构相对复杂，尤其会使用一些复杂的句式和从句。

提纲式作文的一点技巧。

　1、审题。要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。

　2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲。安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。

3、扩展成文。扩展成文时还需注意以下方面问题：1)确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。2)要灵活运用各种句式，如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等，从而增加文章的可读性。注意使用高级框架结构的句子，让文章的结构错落有致。3)用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。文章层次分明，前后表达浑然一体。

4、完稿修改（拼写是否正确，时态及语态，主谓是否一致等）。

亮点分析：

本文第一段用用 宾语从句+非限制性定语从句点出的活动目的及背景：… announce that there is going to be charity bazaar held by our school， which is meant for the people seriously afflicted by the earthquake that happened the week before in Rose City.在句中还运用的过去分词作定语修饰the people seriously afflicted by the earthquake,在由which引导的非限制性定语从句中又有一处由that引导的限制性定语从句修饰the earthquake(that happened the week before in Rose City.)，可谓复杂。

在第二段说明了活动的内容。其中As is known to us all, the earthquake has flattened numerous houses and cracked countless roads, resulting in a formidable situation where a large number of people are reduced to bitter sufferings. 是一个复杂句。既运用了由as引导的非限制性定语从句，由非谓语resulting in a formidable situation作结果状语，而结果状语中又有一个由where引导的定语从句修饰先行词(where a large number of people are reduced to bitter sufferings)situation，定语从句 a charity bazaar where various items donated by us students will be on sale to raise money for the people in need. 强调句型It’s …..that…..(It is on the playground at 2:30 pm this Saturday that we will gather together to make this meaningful event happen.)

在文中使用了高级词汇如be meant for,raise money for the people in need ,on sale urge sb to do sth.reduce sb to doing sth..同时运用的许多连词，如therefore ,as well ,等，让文章结构完整，流畅。

总之，整个文章措辞较严谨中灵活运用各种句式，如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、介词短语，主被动的交错等， 增加文章的可读性。使用高级框架结构的句子，让文章的结构错落有致。连接词的运用，让文章层次分明，前后表达浑然一体。

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