Question

6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
It was 7：15 in the morning of February 8，2017． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the   street． Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road． The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road． He fell with a cry． The car didn't stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864． Two minutes late，I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital．

Answer 1

分析 本文讲述了一次交通事故．
2007年2月8日，我正沿着公园路向东走，一个老人从对面的公园出来．一辆黄色汽车从第三街道转过来，撞倒了老人，司机没有停车，全速向西逃走．我注意到司机是一个带眼睛的年轻人，车牌号是AC864．我拦住一辆过路车把老人送到医院．

解答 It was 7：15 in the morning of February 8，2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the   street． Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road． The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road． He fell with a cry． The car didn't stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was∧young womanwore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864． Two minuteslate，I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital．
试题分析：
1：in改为on．考查介词．  具体到某一天的早晨使用on．
2：while改为when．考查状语从句的引导词．  when后面的从句中可以使用延续性动词也可以使用短暂性动词．While后面的从句只能使用延续性动词．这里的come out of…是一个短暂性动词．故使用when．
3：sides改为side．考查名词． 路的另外一边是单数形式side．
4：made改为make．考查并列的谓语动词．   这里的make a right turn与前面的drive up是并列关系．
5：she改为he．考查代词．  这里的he就是指前面的the man．
6：drive改为drove．考查谓语动词的时态．  这里的drove与前面的didn't是一致的，都使用一般过去式．
7：was后面接a．考查冠词．  后面的名词woman是可数名词，故使用a来修饰．
8：wore前面加who；或者把wore改为wearing．考查句子结构．  本句中wore前面加who是使用定语从句，who代指先行词young woman；或者用现在分词wearing做定语来修饰young woman．
9：late改为later．考查单词辨析． 表示"两分钟以后"用 after two minutes或two minutes later．
10：passed改为passing．考查非谓语动词．修饰名词car应该使用现在分词doing转换的形容词作定语，passing表示"正在经过的"．

点评 考查短文改错．
本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致．各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用．一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多．平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构．修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑．