Question

7．假定你是李华．暑假将至，你们的英语老师让大家写一篇英语短文，谈一谈暑假学习计划．请你根据以下提示，写你的短文．
1．完成假期作业；
2．参加英语角活动；
3．读几本英语读物．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
My summer holidays are just around the corner，and I am so happy that Icould have more than two months to relax myself!
Since Iwill be a third-year senior high student next term，much of my time will be spent in study，though it is a time of rest．First of all，I'lltry to finish all the homework as it is required by my teachers．I am still very weak in English，so Iwill spend more time in learning English．There is a very good English corner in the People's Park，so I will go there every day to practice myoral English．Also，Iwill try to read some easy English readings recommended by my English teacher．I'm sure it will do me a lot of good．
That's my study plan for the summer holidays，and I'lltry my best to carry it out．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于暑假学习计划的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般将来时．内容包括：一假期来临时自己的心情；二自己具体的暑期计划；三表明决心．
高分句型：
1．Since I will be a third-year senior high student next term，much of my time will be spent in study，though it is a time of rest．句子里Since引导原因状语从句，表示"因为"；though引导让步状语从句，表示"尽管"； a time of rest表示"休息的时间"．
因为下个学期我就是高三的学生了，所以大部分时间应该花费在学习上，尽管这是一段休息时间．
2．Also，I will try to read some easy English readings recommended by my English teacher．句子里recommended by my English teacher是过去分词做定语，修饰 some easy English readings．
我也会阅读一些英文老师推荐的简单的英语文章．

解答 My summer holidays are just around the corner，and I am so happy that I could have more than two months to relax myself!（假期来临时自己的心情）
      Since I will be a third-year senior high student next term，much of my time will be spent in study，though it is a time of rest．【高分句型一】First of all，I'll try to finish all the homework as it is required by my teachers．I am still very weak in English，so I will spend more time in learning English．There is a very good English corner in the People's Park，so I will go there every day to practice my oral English．Also，I will try to read some easy English readings recommended by my English teacher．【高分句型二】I'm sure it will do me a lot of good．（自己具体的暑期计划）
That's my study plan for the summer holidays，and I'll try my best to carry it out．（表明决心）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
书面表达是一个高度综合性的题目，旨在考查考生的英语基础，发扬个性、关注环境的设题理念仍将是未来几年高考书面表 达的基本思路． 试题设置均为半开放式，给考生一定提 示的同时，也给考生提供了更为宽广的思维 空间，使考生留有很大的自由发挥的余地，这样更能全面和客观地考查考生的语言组织 和书面表达的能力．要写出一篇好的文章，考生不仅要精炼地表达所给信息，更加重要 的是在自由发挥部分，要有自己独到的见解．