最近学校正在展开一场急救知识普及活动.就此你所在的班级举行了一场讨论会.并提出以下几点建议．现请你根据以下要点以First Aid in Fires 为题写一篇文章.说明发生火灾时要注意的几点事项.贴在班级的板报上．注意事项:1．不要惊慌.保持冷静,2．室内有浓烟时.身体尽量低一些.用湿毛巾捂住鼻子和嘴巴逃出,3．不要乘坐电梯或从高层跳下,4� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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14．最近学校正在展开一场急救知识普及活动，就此你所在的班级举行了一场讨论会，并提出以下几点建议．现请你根据以下要点以First Aid in Fires 为题写一篇文章，说明发生火灾时要注意的几点事项，贴在班级的板报上．
注意事项：
1．不要惊慌，保持冷静；
2．室内有浓烟时，身体尽量低一些，用湿毛巾捂住鼻子和嘴巴逃出；
3．不要乘坐电梯或从高层跳下；
4．你自己还有什么好的建议．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯．
First Aid in Fires
It is important to know what to do when you are in dangerous situations such as a fire．So please readthe following tips which must help you when a fire happens．（点明主题）
When you are caught in a fire，don't panic．Firstly，you should call 119 and report it to firemen at once．If you are in thick smoke，keep close to the ground and use a wet towel to cover your mouth and nose．Secondly，don't take a lift or jump from a high building．You can fasten ropes to something that's fixed and then slide down the building．Thirdly，don't be unwilling to leave your money or other things behind．You should try to get away from the fire as quickly as you can．After all，life is more important．Once you get out of the fire，don't go back into it again．（火灾发生时具体的建议）
We cann't predict what will happen next second，so keep the tips in mind to nip it in the bud．（再次提示注意这些建议的重要性）．

分析这是一篇关于发生火灾时要注意的几点事项的作文．根据题目要求可知用第二人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明主题；二火灾发生时具体的建议；三再次提示注意这些建议的重要性．
高分句型：
1．So please read the following tips which must help you when a fire happens．句子里which引导定语从句，代指先行词the following tips；when 引导从句的时间状语从句．
所以请阅读下面的建议，当火灾发生的时候，这些建议肯定会帮到你．
2．You can fasten ropes to something that's fixed and then slide down the building．句子里fasten…to…表示"把…栓到…"； that引导定语从句，代指先行词something．
你可以把绳子栓到一个固定好的物体上，然后从楼上滑下来．

解答 First Aid in Fires
     It is important to know what to do when you are in dangerous situations such as a fire．So please read the following tips which must help youwhen a fire happens．【高分句型一】（点明主题）
    When you are caught in a fire，don't panic．Firstly，you should call 119 and report it to firemen at once．If you are in thick smoke，keep close to the ground and use a wet towel to cover your mouth and nose．Secondly，don't take a lift or jump from a high building．You can fasten ropes to something that's fixed and then slide down the building．【高分句型二】Thirdly，don't be unwilling to leave your money or other things behind．You should try to get away from the fire as quickly as you can．After all，life is more important．Once you get out of the fire，don't go back into it again．（火灾发生时具体的建议）
      You cann't predict what will happen next second，so keep the tips in mind to nip it in the bud．（再次提示注意这些建议的重要性）

点评考查提纲类作文．
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．