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【题目】2009年12月12日，你校在大操场举行了升旗仪式。主题是：注意安全，珍爱生命。学生代表唐韶峰作了发言；接着校长提出了具体的要求。请你就此事用英语给写一篇报道。 注意：报道必须包括以下内容。开头已给，不计词数。 词数：150左右 参考词汇： 安全隐患： hidden threat against safety 食物中毒：food poisoning 教学区：academic areas

学 生	安全隐患多（ 体育运动损伤，交通事故，食物中毒……）
	注意安全, 多学点急救知识
	一人安全, 全家幸福
校 长	校园安全,师生共同重视
	严禁校园骑车; 教学区内,不得进行球类运动
	上下楼梯, 靠右慢行
	教室无人,确保窗关门锁
	上学及回家路上遵守交通规则

On December 12th, 2009, our school held a flag-raising ceremony in the playground with the theme “For your safety, for your life!”

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Answer 1

【答案】On December 12th,2009, our school held a flag-raising ceremony in the playground with the theme “For your safety, for your life!”

Tang Shaofeng, one of the students made a speech. He said that safety concerns every one of us and hidden threat against safety was everywhere. We may easily get injured in ports, traffic accidents , or get sick from food poisoning. He called on us to pay more attention to safety and try to learn more about first aid. He also mentioned that we should take good care of ourselves for the sake of our family’s happiness.

Later, our headmaster gave us some specific requirements on campus. Since a safe environment on campus is everyone’s responsibility, it’s high time we did something to ensure our own safety at school. Riding bicycles on campus is strongly prohibited. No ballgames are allowed in the academic areas. Keep to the right when going upstairs or downstairs. Make sure that the windows are closed and doors are locked when the last one leaves the classroom. What’s more, always obey the traffic rules on your way home or

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【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，使用的句型变化多样：…that we should take good care of ourselves for the sake of our family’s happiness这句话是宾语从句；Since a safe environment on campus is everyone’s responsibility…这句话使用了状语从句；it’s high time we did something to ensure our own safety at school这句话使用了不虚拟语气；Riding bicycles on campus is strongly prohibited. 这句话使用了动名词作主语；Keep to the right when going upstairs or downstairs. 这句话使用了状语从句的省略；Make sure that the windows are closed and doors are locked when the last one leaves the classroom. 这句话使用了宾语从句和状语从句。