题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学的李华,你校将在下周五举办“校园文化节(Campus Culture Festival)”系列活动。请给你班留学生Jim写封邮件,邀请他参加其中的一个活动。邮件的内容包括:
1. 介绍你推荐的活动;
2. 说明你推荐的理由;
3. 询问对方的意向。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jim,
How’s everything going? I’ m writing to invite you to our Campus Culture Festival next Friday. It’ll be full of fun!
I highly recommend the Calligraphy Experience Corner, which is tailor-made for students who have a burning passion for calligraphy. There will be a lecture delivered by an expert from college informing us of the history of calligraphy. You have a keen interest in Chinese calligraphy. That’s why I recommend this activity. Besides, it would be a good opportunity for you to meet and exchange ideas with people who share your passion.
What do you think of it? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达是一封书信。假设你是红星中学的李华,你校将在下周五举办“校园文化节”系列活动。请给你班留学生Jim写封邮件,邀请他参加其中的一个活动。
这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,不能遗漏要点:1. 介绍你推荐的活动;2. 说明你推荐的理由;3. 询问对方的意向。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有:I’ m writing to invite you to our Campus Culture Festival next Friday. highly recommend,a lecture delivered by an expert from college,inform us of the history of calligraphy,a good opportunity,meet and exchange ideas with people,I’m looking forward to your reply.。可以使用的衔接词:1.表示选择关系或对等关系的连接词:either…or…,neither…nor,or,as well as…,both…and…。2.表示因果关系的连接词:therefore,so,as a result,as a result of …,because of,due to,owing to,thanks to等。3.表示时间顺序的连接词:then,later,meanwhile,at the beginning,in the end,before long,as soon as,at first,for the first(second…)time,the minute,the moment等。4.表示转折对比关系的连接词:yet,but,while,on the contrary,on the other hand,however等。5.表示解释说明的连接词:that is,that is to say,in other words,such as,for instance,and so on等。6.表示递进关系的连接词:not only…but (also),what’s more,what’s worse,besides,in addition,worse still,moreover等。7.表示总结的连接词:in a word,on the whole,in short,briefly,in brief,to sum up,in all等。