题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,寒假期间准备去北京旅游。请你根据下面的提示,用英语给你的网友李红写一封邮件。主要内容如下:
1.你以前从未去过北京,请他当向导,带你参观长城,颐和园和其它名胜;
2.想住在他家里,以便聊聊彼此的生活和学习;
3.问候他的父母。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.颐和园the Summer Palace
Dear Li Hong,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Li Hong,
I haven’t heard from you for quite a long time. How have you been these days?
During the coming winter vacation, I’m going to Beijing for a tour. As I have never been to Beijing before, I’d like you to be my guide. I hope you can show me around the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and some other places of interest. What’s more, during my visit I hope to stay together with you in your house so that we can have a good talk about our life and studies. What do you think of my idea? I would like to know your opinion.
Please give my best regards(问候)to your parents.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是一篇提纲类作文。审题是否清楚是一篇书面表达成功与否的关键所在,在整个写作过程中起着决定性作用。
(1)审要求:书面表达试题一般都由“情景”和“要求”两部分构成。“情景”中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等,寒假期间准备去北京旅游;而“要求”一般在书面表达的后半部分,主要内容如下:1.你以前从未去过北京,请他当向导,带你参观长城,颐和园和其它名胜;2.想住在他家里,以便聊聊彼此的生活和学习;3.问候他的父母。因而考生对于题目所提供的说明,应认真分析、反复推敲,搞清提出的内容要求,抓住所要表达的信息点。
(2)审文体:本文体裁是应用文,书信,审题时要审清文体,注意格式上的不同,避免出错。
(3)审人称:写稿人已明确指出,给出形式假设环境中的“某人”,如“假设你是李华”,写作时即用第一人称“我”,即李华。而读者对象有时没有明示,要考生自己去进行判断。
(4)审时态:根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态,即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事,通知书信多用将来时。范文中使用了高级词汇show me around, places of interest,give my best regards(问候)to,和句型,以提高文章的档次;恰当使用一些连词、插入语What's more,使文章表达自然,流畅。注意次数:80—120之间。
【范文亮点】①As I have never been to Beijing before, I’d like you to be my guide.状语从句
②Please give my best regards(问候)to your parents. 祈使句。